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You're broken porcelain, merely fragments,
beautiful still.
And I, being foolish as I am, attempt to
fix you,
but the shards sink in, and they
cut my skin,
and my hands, oh how they
bled.
But you held them, tightly,
you held them, regardless.
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's very sweet :)
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HikariTheFishy Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I try.
It's very easy when you have something that is so lovely in your life that you wish to write about, somebody in this case.
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well that's good!
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Writer
:D
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Writer
because I wanted to bleed with you

xD I wanted to be the other person speaking
I enjoyed this very much, but i want to hear the other person in their point of view
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HikariTheFishy Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is a very good idea, perhaps it's inspiring as well, I find myself wanting to write it.
Thank you so very much for the suggestion.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Writer
No no, thank you for thinking it was good :D
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HikariTheFishy Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it as I reply.
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Annuski Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Writer
Wow, I love it! It's short and straight to the point, and tells such a beautiful story
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HikariTheFishy Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the lovely comment, darling.
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